SAMOHI HOMEPAGE I ENGLISH DEPARTMENT



Benchmarks for Writing Standards, 1, 2, 3


9th GRADE
  • Argument
  • Organization
  • Style
  • Grammar


9th Grade Argument

  • Elements of argument: topic sentence, context, evidence, analysis, inference
  • Fall - What a thesis is (i.e., an opinion to be proved); writing a thesis based on teacher models
  • Spring - Generating a thesis from given prompt
  • Using relevant whole-sentence quotes, introduced with a comma or colon
  • Identifying the speaker and context for each quote
  • 3 or more quotes to prove a thesis
  • Clear, concise, complete, and convincing analysis as to how the quotes support the thesis
  • Introduction that includes author and title of work and thesis of essay


9th Grade Organization

  • Each paragraph presenting one idea. Same idea not recurring in more than one paragraph
  • Every sentence in a paragraph relevant to the paragraph's topic
  • Helpful, logical transitions between and within paragraphs
  • Sequence of ideas in the body of the paper same as the sequence of ideas presented in the thesis
  • Conclusion (restatement of thesis, at least)
  • Conventional format (font, margins, spacing, etc.)


9th Grade Style

  • Audience and purpose
  • Appropriate and consistent tone
  • Correct punctuation of titles (italicize/underline vs. quotes)
  • Consistent tense throughout paper
  • Correct capitalization
  • Avoiding abbreviations, including etc.
  • Avoiding monotonous repetition of phrases (e. g., he/she says)
  • Avoiding first and second person ("I," "me," "you"), except in personal or creative writing


9th Grade Grammar

  • Minimum 30 minutes/week
  • Grammar lessons should be clearly relevant to students' own reading and writing
  • Parts of speech
  • Prepositional phrases
  • Subject-verb-object
  • Verb tenses: past, present, future.
  • Use the present tense when writing about literature
  • Subject/verb agreement
  • Uses of apostrophe
  • Capitalization
  • Homophones


10th GRADE
  • Argument
  • Organization
  • Style
  • Grammar


10th Grade Argument

  • Review of grade 9 curriculum
  • Fall - Given a prompt, student generates own thesis
  • Spring - Student generates own thesis without prompt
  • Integrating quoted words and phrases into student's prose
  • Clear, concise, complete, and convincing analysis as to how the quotes support the thesis
  • 2 or more quotes per argument
  • Review of grade 9 curriculum
    Introduction that includes author and title of work and thesis of essay


10th Grade Organization

  • Multiple strategies for an introduction that hooks the reader and introduces the thesis
  • Multiple strategies for a satisfying conclusion
  • Review of grade 9 curriculum
  • Integrating quoted words and phrases into student's prose
  • Clear, concise, complete, and convincing analysis as to how the quotes support the thesis
  • 2 or more quotes per argument
  • Review of grade 9 curriculum


10th Grade Style

  • Concrete language
  • Strong verbs; avoiding overuse of "to be"
  • Uses of comma and semi-colon
  • Variety of sentence length and structure


10th Grade Grammar

  • Minimum 30 minutes/week
  • Grammar lessons should be clearly relevant to students' own reading and writing
  • Review of grade 9 curriculum
  • Independent and dependent clauses
  • Sentence patterns (simple, compound, complex, compound-complex)
  • Indirect object
  • Transitive and intransitive verbs
  • Sentence sense: avoiding fragments, comma splices, run-on sentences
  • Clauses and phrases that function as parts of speech: adverbials; adjective phrases and clauses; noun phrases and clauses
  • Pronouns - agreement; clear antecedent


11th GRADE
  • Argument
  • Organization
  • Style
  • Grammar


11th Grade Argument

  • Review of grade 9 and 10 curriculum
  • Originality of topic or treatment
  • Strategies of argument: - definition-cause and effect-process analysis-division and classification-comparison and contrast-description-narrative


11th Grade Organization

  • Review of grade 9 and 10 curriculum
  • Organization of ideas that is both logical and dramatic


11th Grade Style

  • Review of grade 9 and 10 curriculum
  • Revision to avoid wordiness
  • Parallel structure
  • Avoiding overuse of the passive voice
  • Distinctive tone


11th Grade Grammar

  • Review of grade 9 and 10 curriculum
  • Dangling/misplaced modifiers
  • Loose vs. periodic sentences
  • Active vs. passive voice
  • When to use who, which, or that


12th GRADE Argument, Organization, Style, and Grammar


  • Review and work towards mastery of grade 9, 10, and 11 ARGUMENT curriculum
  • Review and work towards mastery of grade 9, 10, and 11 ORGANIZATION curriculum
  • Review and work towards mastery of grade 9, 10, and 11 STYLE curriculum
  • Active vs. passive voice
  • Review and work towards mastery of grade 9, 10, and 11 GRAMMAR curriculum